Life is something you need, without it you wouldn’t be here today. You never know when you won’t be here; and the quote “ live everyday like it’s your last” kind of describes that because there could be changes, things that should be said, and that you are only going to live once.
Things change all the time and you never know when the thing that changes is your life. One day everything can be fine and the next you might not even have a have a life. Some changes are scary so you have to adapt to them and try not to let them bother you. Do everything you need to do and change those bad things into good things. Your last day could be coming up soon.
When you have something to tell someone and it is important you need to tell them because you might not live another day to tell them that you love them, or they’re your best friend, or just saying thank you. But, it doesn’t just have to be good things you need to say it could be bad things as well. If there was something said that needed to be, then it could have helped someone feel special, needed, and like they have accomplished something. When you say just one little thing.
A precious thing that can’t ever be replaced is your life. You have one chance to make it work for yourself. Take everything you have got and use it all on your life because you only live once to use it.
So when you wake up every morning just remember that you need to “live everyday like it’s your last” and that things are always going to change, and that your going to have to say at least one thing to someone that is important to you that should be said, and that you only are going to live once.
Monday, May 02, 2005
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I liked your whole essay! It was totally true. I liked how you put all the details in and didn't lave anything out i needed to know. I think so of your sentences flowed but you can work on a few sentences. I liked it overall.
come on that essay rocked son
I really enjoyed reading your essay. You had a lot of things that was true. I think that in your feature essays...that they would all be really good if you keep doing essays the way that you did on this one. Good job overall.
I liked your essay. i really liked the beginning sentance and how it grabed me into your essay.over all it was great.
I thought your essay was really good. It is really true. You added a lot of detail. I also lovd thie quote in the beginning. That is so true cause you never know what is going to happen to you and if you live life like it is your last day then you will hav lived a good and fun life.
Wow that was an awesome essay.Your introduction pulled me into the whole essay,and i like how you put "live everday like its your last". That made me wonder so that was a good thing to put in there.Even though it was good you kinda repeated yourself a little, like you didnt know what to say.But all of it is true, if we were to die tomorrow, we would wonder why we didnt share our feelings wiktht he ones we love, or tell your best friend somthing.Your essay brought me to reality,it conneceted to me a lot what you said in your essay really got to me.Good job!!!!!
This story really made me think about how long we all really have to live this life of ours. We are all given a short life on this planet wether by god or mother nature. Life is to short to waste. Everyone needs to live life to it's fullest just like you said. If you got something to tell a stcret of some kind you need to get it out before it is to late. No one knows when we will be taken from this planet. Make your inpression on the earth before it is too late.
Wow, your essay was great! Your beggining really pulled me in, what with the whole " life is something you need" thing! I now know how important life is, and that you should'nt take it for granit! You really included the actuall point, and backup, so it had a lot of meaning! You really dug deep, and it paid off! Your essay's will be good next time because you get right to the point. Your flow was good, too.
That was a good essay but a few things could be better. You could use better word choice,have no run on sentences ,and add a few more details.Your introduction was 2 sentences and you could have broke it down and added more detail.You could also indent your paragraphs because it was hard to tell when the next paragraph was starting. You mad a really clear point throughout your essay.In the future you will be great at stating your opinion, but you may want to work on voice,word choice,anddetails.
Good Job
Your entire essay was short and to the point "which is a good thing." You used some great description and started me up fast. Some words of advice is that you should make your essay a little bit longer just to add that extra "umph."
I liked your whole essay! It was totaly true. I liked how you put all your details in and didn't leave anything out I needed to know. I think so of our sentences flowed but you can work on a few sentences like the quote at the begining it was really good if you put another one in it would be even better. I liked it overall.
HEY THIS WAS GREAT!!! TO BE HONEST THIS ESSAY REALLY CHANGED MY MOOD WHEN I READ IT. YOU MADE SOME REALLY GOOD POINTS IN THERE WHICH WAS GREAT.KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!
This paper was great. I agreed with almost all of it. I really liked it when you added a qoute to the essay. "life is somthing you need." that sentence really made me want to continue reading the essay. I really agree that every one should should live like everyday is your last.
Your essay was great and it was tottally true. some sentences could have been fix up a little bit but nobodies perfect. if you keep up the good work then yu can get really far in writing, thats if you want to become a writer! keep up the good work!
Your essay was great and it was tottally true. some sentences could have been fix up a little bit but nobodies perfect. if you keep up the good work then yu can get really far in writing, thats if you want to become a writer! keep up the good work!
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