You can never turn back time. You can only live off your memories. Time is a very precious thing, and sometimes if your not careful it will slip right past you. “Living every day like it’s your last,” is a great way to think about life because you will not regret any moment, you will have more fun, and you never know when life might take an unexpected turn.
If someone close to you has died, someone almost always regrets, regrets what they said, what they did, and sometimes what they didn’t do. If you were in that person’s place, and about to die, would you really want to look back on your life and wish that you had done something differently? Life is like a sponge. You have to squeeze it to get every last drop out of it, and by doing so you will be much happier because you will not regret doing anything. You only live once, so why not live it to your fullest?
Having fun is probably of some importance to every person, but if you take chances, and have a positive attitude, then you will most likely have more fun. There are always some days when you’re feeling down, but if you make the most out of it, you will be much happy with yourself.
Parents are always holding on to their child’s hand when they are little for safety. But accidents do happen, and people get hurt. You never know when something might happen to you. You could step off a curb and get hit by a bus, so if you take chances you will do more in your life. After all, life is short, and it can fly right by.
Live every day like it’s your last and you will overall live a happier and fuller life.
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I'm starting to get a different look at life. You was was pretty good. Though the first sentence of your 2nd paragraph was very confusing. To make your essays better, read over the essay before publihing. This was good but needs some work.
I really liked your intro and all in all I think your essay was awesome Your second paragraph was very confusing and its really easy to confuse me to make your future essays beter you will have to look over it before you post t
Your essay was overall really good. I really liked some of the similies you used like the one were you said "life is like a sponge you have to squeeze it to get every last drop. But you could have also made your essay longer and more detailed. Your second paragraph was also really confusing and it made it really hard to follow. I definetly think it was a good essay but it could use some more detail.
You started really good with your essay."Living every day like it's your is a common yet intresting detale. Talking about regrets is a great way to prove your point also talking about fun is an equal important proving point thing.though I dont really agree with some parts of your essay it was still good.
This essay is great it not only tells how short and how presis life is but how you should live it. Not like the others at all insted of you sugjesting me to live life to the fulles your telling me to. I feel compeled to do it i feel like I should do what i want and have no regrets at all. You could still work on your grammer because the lines did not flow as well as they could have. Overall you did great.
This essay is just trying to give you a reality cheack that life is too short to let it slip between your finger. You could step off a curb and get hit by a bus, so if you take chances you will do more in your life. You could step off a curb and get hit by a bus, so if you take chances you will do more in your life I found this sentance to be kind of depressing so I'm not sure if it is the best sentance especially since prior to that sentance you were saying to keep a positive outlook. I think that you are a very persuasive writer that can sway people to think like you. Your future essays will be good because you are good with persuasive writing. In the future your essays will be better because you will be alittle better at not being so repeatetive.
I think your essay was great. I can relate to the regreting what you didn't do. I also liked your life-sponge analogy. GOOD JOB!!
I think your essay was great and strung together perfectly.
That is very true you can not turn back time. If you have a once in a life time chance you have to go for it. some things that would improve your writing would be to make it a little longer. Things that you shold keep could be the quote it was pretty good.It was a good esay but you need alittle more detalis.
You did really well on your points. After the first few sentences you kind-of lost me. It seemed like some sentences were out of place.Your detail was great but I think you need some work on your essay.
when you said what you did, it is like you tuched my feallings.
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