Time is written in stone that’s why things always happens for a reason some people think that way because of people’s beliefs, life sometimes needs to change for good or worse and because people need to be taught a lesson about something.
People’s belief play a big role in the way people think about things happening for a reason like some people believe that they are to follow in Jesus footsteps or any other person that is in the bible even people are becoming priests because of their beliefs. Whether they’re Catholic or Jewish each one believe in its own way of things happen for a reason.
Secondly, life sometimes needs to change for good or bad. See the reason is that life needs to be changed for the good of people or the good of one person like a grandson or even a tiny little dog can keep an man or woman from suffer from a fatal illness or even fix little thing like a persons self of steam, but when a person needs his or her life to be to changed for a bad reason then it is probably because the person needs to be realize that he or she shouldn’t take things for granted. This is another weird way things happen for a reason.
Lastly, people need to be taught a lesson and that’s why things happen like when a person looses his job and then comes home and realizes that his life has much more meaning then to go find a new job work and then become old without even leaving a mark on the world and that lesson was telling that life is to short so you should get out there and do the stuff that he wants to do.
Finally, things happen for a reason it’s the natural order of things or destiny decides what’s going to happen to the world or what’s going to happen to you which ever one you agree with they both say that things happen for a reason.
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great, I like it very origanal
I thought your essay was pretty good. But this sentence i didnt really understand...Time is written in stone thats why things always happens for a reason. Im not sure of what your trying to say... Also there are some punctuation problems. But all in all i thought it was very creative. You had some original ideas. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
I agree with how things happen for a reason. All of the details you gave were great. In the second paragraph, I like what you were saying. You gave a great point and I agree with you. Reading this essay made me think a lot about the topic. In the essay, yoou might want to put in a few more periods because there are a lot of runons.Your future essays will be better if you use some more periods. your essays will be good because you give a lot of detail.
hey I loved your essay.I liked how it grabed me at the begining.I also liked you detail and word choice.
Cool essay I thought the beginning was catchy. There were a lot of punctuation problems so mabey thoes ciukd be fixed.
you could of made your intorduction should have sentences then one big one and how you used first, second, and finaly was kind of childest. It was good when you compared the stuff to older stuff.
I think your essay was pretty good but it kind of lacked structure. The "Time is written in stone" sentence, I think, could be rephrased so it makes more sense.
"peoples beliefs play a big roll ub the way they think." i took this quote because i couldn't agree more people have different thoughts and it showsin the way they look and their personality. if you come up to say a morman and a Catholic they will have different point of views and they will think dfferently about life. i loved this essay and it really got to me
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