Tuesday, April 26, 2005

EVERYTHING happens for a reason!

I do believe everything happens for a reason because people have to think before they do. They have emotions for what they do like, if their dad passes away, then they, get sad and they do stuff randomly and they do think because their reason is that their dad died, so they get angry at the world. And if you go out with someone, the reason is that you love him or her. And people think before they act cause if they don’t then they end up doing something horrible, but if they do think then they will end up doing something really great or something stupid cause they thought it was going to be cool. If you don’t have a reason for the actions you do, it is just like saying you don’t have a reason for life!
If you get up in the morning and ask yourself if you want to go have coffee with him or something, you would say yes cause you want to and you want to spend time with him and talk for a very long time. If you play soccer then your main reason is that you love it and you want to play it because it makes you feel good about yourself and so you can make new friends and play n’ have fun. You do track all the time and you know your fast and you reason is that you like to run and you like to get the exercise. If you are a teacher it is because you love kids or you just like to teach and help them out by making them smarter and watch them get right answers all the time.
Your in love with someone you have known for a long time and he loves you to and you don’t want to brake that up ever, but the reason is that if you have something in your heart like love you are so careful that if you drop it, it is like it will brake and you cant put it back together cause it is in a million pieces. People that are all over the world who are mental or know people that are mental and you try to help them any way possible and you do it because you feel sorry for them or there your friends and you want to be with them for as long as you can and you love them.
All these examples show that there are reasons for a lot of things. And these are like playing sports or if you are in love in any kind of way and everything else that goes with a reason and if you just believe then you have a way of preventing anything from happening anymore or keep what you love going on for a very long time! And if you are a believer then your live is a reason for living!

6 comments:

goooo5 said...
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goooo5 said...

i really liked it the intro was a little not goodyou should ask a few more questionsin the introyou shouldent start sentanses with if youor when you do you.you diddent really answer the question you just gave reasons of why or how it could. i really liked the conclusionyou should start out with do you belive but other than that it was good

duck and roll chick 14 said...

hey I loved your essay.I liked how it grabed me at the begining.I also liked you detail and word choice.

my said...

first you were talking about reason and then you switch to love. your story was go for telling people about love not reason.

Barron* said...

It was catchy at the beginning it was a good essay.

Long-boarder42 said...

I REALLY DIDDN,T UNDERSTAND YOUR POINT. YOU HAVE ONLY 3 PHARAGRAPHS AND TO HELP WITH THAT YOU SHOUL MAKE A THISIS SO YOU HAVE A TOPIC FOR EACH OF YOUR PARAGRAPHS. I LIKED ALL OF YOUR DETAIL AND THEY SUPORTED YOUR TOPIC I THINK.